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眼神迷离 · 发表于 2004-12-31 22:48

happy new year,moneygrubber!

crashsmash · 发表于 2004-12-31 22:57

以下是引用小蓝在2004-12-16 9:43:51的发言：
thank you waiwai, I am sorry for not examine whole text, I just checked it in a glance while transfer this file, I will pay more attention to do so at next time. I supposed that if you advise it by English, you could got more challenge from this. what do you think so?

给出一些勘误，不知道对不对？

transfer -> translating
to do so at next time -> next time

I supposed that if you advise it by English, you could got more challenge from this.->

I think you will get more practices while giving advice in English.

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眼神迷离 · 发表于 2005-1-3 19:26

i sleeped almost three days and food two times everyday.New year's is over.tomorrow is working day again.now i wait for New Year's Eve.it means eating.playing.new coat and year-end bouns.the next one who read this page.what did you do in the past three days and what are you going to do in New Year's Eve.

潜水员 · 发表于 2005-1-3 20:43

以下是引用眼神迷离在2005-1-3 19:26:18的发言：
i sleeped almost three days and food two times everyday.New year's is over.tomorrow is working day again.
now i wait for New Year's Eve.it means eating.playing.new coat and year-end bouns.
the next one who read this page.what did you do in the past three days and what are you going to do in New Year's Eve.

It is very hard to read your words.
let me try to check with it, may I?
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I had sleep and two dinners everyday during my new year's holidy almost, now the holiday is over and it is time to back work tomorrow.
I am waiting for Chinses New Year now. It is means eating, entertainment, new clothing and the year-end bouns.
To the next one: What did you do in the past three days and what are you going to do in the Chinese New Year's Eve. Thanks!

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-1-3 20:55:46编辑过]

眼神迷离 · 发表于 2005-1-3 21:42

excuse me for make you feel so hard to read it.but i do it unmeantly.fortunately.you are a Chinese.so you understand what i said.thank you very much!i know i will be better the next time.

对面 · 发表于 2005-1-4 10:46

HAPPY NEW YEAR！AND HAVE A GOOD TIME IN YOUR FIRST WORKING DAY OF THE 2005

长剑出鞘 · 发表于 2005-1-4 19:17

以下是引用中宇在2005-1-4 17:56:59的发言：
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U've made many mistakes!

That's learning.

眼神迷离 · 发表于 2005-1-4 20:17

以下是引用中宇在2005-1-4 17:56:59的发言：
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U've made many mistakes!

check it?

眼神迷离 · 发表于 2005-1-4 20:19

以下是引用长剑出鞘在2005-1-4 19:17:12的发言：
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That's learning.

Comrade! u understood me more.

潜水员 · 发表于 2005-1-5 13:31

以下是引用拽拽的在2005-1-4 21:58:54的发言：

If you find any mistake, please help me to amend them. Thanks in advance.

Amend is the intransitive verb (vi.) so I think use the 'correct' (transitive verb) is better than amend. 
May I?

潜水员 · 发表于 2005-1-5 13:44

以下是引用marioplus在2004-12-26 19:53:44的发言：
It's my first time to take part in this english corner.I guess everybody here has good education,But what's in pity, this two days nobody is here .

You may use 'in here' to replace 'is here'.
May I?

潜水员 · 发表于 2005-1-5 13:57

以下是引用眼神迷离在2004-12-28 20:01:37的发言：
though it snow heavily,our car came back safely.we saw a traffic accident in freeway.a benz bumped like garbage.

Though it is snowstorm, but my car has been came back home safely.
We saw a traffic accident on freeway that a Benz is crashed like garbage.
May I?

marioplus · 发表于 2005-1-5 19:12

this two days nobody is here .

You may use 'in here' to replace 'is here'.是不是改了后会少谓语
Though it is snowstorm, but my car has been came back home safely.
We saw a traffic accident on freeway that a Benz is crashed like garbage. you can use only one of the words .

marioplus · 发表于 2005-1-5 19:48

以下是引用潜水员在2005-1-5 13:57:47的发言：
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Though it is snowstorm, but my car has been came back home safely.

We saw a traffic accident on freeway that a Benz is crashed like garbage.

May I?

I have some problems:
First:you can only use one word between though and but.
Second:in the sentence"but my car has been came back home safely". "come"is not a continuous word (延续性动词）so it can not be used in perfective tense.(完成时态)
Third: Pay attention to your tense.in the sentence"We saw a traffic accident on freeway that a Benz is crashed like garbage".you use "saw"firstly.why not use "was " but "is"in next sentence.
 This is just my own view.I am also thankful to you for your advice.

crashsmash · 发表于 2005-1-5 22:52

Today, I passed road examine. Here I want to tell everybody to share the good news. Hehe!After the examinant said "you passed!", a new road killer came into the world!My coach always says "Faster on road, wider and deeper traffic view you get. It's good to you and the other on road!". Haha! So I always drives the car at more than 80 km/h in training course. That's why I am a road killer.

眼神迷离 · 发表于 2005-1-6 19:20

did you pass the test in one time? some of my colleauge had taken the test several times ,but failed to pss it .now they have a phobia for driving test.

marioplus · 发表于 2005-1-7 20:28

以下是引用crashsmash在2005-1-5 22:52:39的发言：

Today, I passed road examine. Here I want to tell everybody to share the good news. Hehe!
After the examinant said "you passed!", a new road killer came into the world!
My coach always says "Faster on road, wider and deeper traffic view you get. It's good to you and the other on road!". Haha! 
So I always drives the car at more than 80 km/h in training course. That's why I am a road killer.

I just want to learn how to drive.can you give me some advice? Or would like to introduce your coach to me ?thank you ? 
 Looking forward to hearing from you !

crashsmash · 发表于 2005-1-8 10:07

以下是引用眼神迷离在2005-1-6 19:20:42的发言：

did you pass the test in one time? some of my colleauge had taken the test several times ,but failed to pss it .now they have a phobia for driving test.

Hehe, I failed at first time for turn around without light. Maybe I was too nervous to forget it.
The examinant took it too seriously, and checked the panel and the speed ceaselessly.
I almost couldn't bear it!!! WIth the high pressure beside, anybody may fail, I think.

crashsmash · 发表于 2005-1-8 22:41

以下是引用marioplus在2005-1-7 20:28:04的发言：
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I just want to learn how to drive.can you give me some advice? Or would like to introduce your coach to me ?thank you ? 
 Looking forward to hearing from you !

First, you'd better find a good coach with your friends' help. The coach must works for a formal traning school. 
Your friends will introduce their former coachs to you. Different coachs have different training methods. You have to make a choice among these candidates.
Some coachs just shout at you for your minor mistakes, but some will tell you how to do it better without any blame. A coach with good communication skill will make you enjoy the traing course. But a tough man just tax your patience.
Some coachs are radical and the others are conservative. That will be better that your character is same as your coach.
My coach's name is Guangming Wang, and he is a four-star coach of Changyun Drive Training School. I can introduce you to my coach if you are about to learn drive skill. Message me when you are ready.

雨浓 · 发表于 2005-1-10 00:00

me too. it's too boring. maybe i am tired. good night, and have a good dream.

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